Hey Anthony, I think you made some great points in your pitch, as there are plenty of students and Gator fans who also double as soccer fans. Therefore, I think a men's soccer team would certainly garner interest here at the University of Florida. I enjoyed your video, my only tip would be to be more fluent while making your pitch, but other than that thought you did a great job, you seem really passionate about your idea.
Hey Anthony, Great job here. You did excellently well in hooking the viewers quick in the beginning of your video. I feel that the tone however dropped off a bit as the video progressed. That being said, you do have a need here that suits an important and sizable market. A men's team for soccer here at UF is something I'd certainly be interested, because soccer is my favorite sport.
Hey Anthony,
ReplyDeleteI think you made some great points in your pitch, as there are plenty of students and Gator fans who also double as soccer fans. Therefore, I think a men's soccer team would certainly garner interest here at the University of Florida. I enjoyed your video, my only tip would be to be more fluent while making your pitch, but other than that thought you did a great job, you seem really passionate about your idea.
Hey Anthony,
ReplyDeleteGreat job here. You did excellently well in hooking the viewers quick in the beginning of your video. I feel that the tone however dropped off a bit as the video progressed. That being said, you do have a need here that suits an important and sizable market. A men's team for soccer here at UF is something I'd certainly be interested, because soccer is my favorite sport.